A story inspired by the song "Don't take the girl" These are not my characters or my song…I heard the song and thought hey wouldn't this make an interested twist on a story? Please send your comments, but don't be too harsh…
by
Higna
(MynameisHigna@aol.com)
We begin the story with Maxwell taking Brighton on a little fishing trip when Brighton was twelve years old.
Max: B is your stuff ready? Don't forget the bait son. This trip is going to be great well spend some quality time together!
B: Dad I think I got everything let me check
Pole- check
Bait- check
Line –check yeah dad everything set
Just then Nanny Fine runs through the door with a make up case in hand and holding a fishing pole…
B: Yes! Fran's going this going to be even better
Max: No, Miss Fine you can't not go on our all male fishing trip…that's it no!
B: (acting smart) Dad, I know you don't want her to go, but someday you'll change your mind. And we can't leave her behind…
Max: Take any of your friends you want but please don't take the nanny.
10 years down the road…same old Maxwell…same sweet Nanny.
Maxwell and Fran have finally decided to become friendlier and start dating. Just as B and the other children had predicted. Max decides to take Fran to a carnival for a wonderful night.
Stranger comes and pulls a gun grabs her by the arm says if you do what I tell you too there wouldn't be any harm.
Maxwell says take my wallet, take the musical cats, take all my money, or even my limo, but please don't take my nanny.
Fran: I can't believe you would give up all that for me…are you crazy?
Max: No, Fran I am only crazy about you. Can't you see I love you more than life itself? No material goods could replace your smile your heart. My tears could never wash away the pain if you left me. Please understand that I love you.
Fran: Max I don't know what to say I love you too (as tears run down her face)
Max: Please just say yes…will you marry me?
Fran: Oh Max yes of course!
5 years down the line same old Maxwell…same sweet Nanny
Max: doctor, doctor…is my wife ok? How's the baby?
Nurse: Mr. Sheffield I think you may need to leave
There's going to be a little one and doctor says its time to go the baby's fine, but his momma fading and fast and Maxwell hit his knees and then he prayed
Take the very breath you gave me, take the heart from my chest
Make this my last request
But god please don't take
The nanny
My nanny.
Maxwell was taking Brighton fishing on all male fishing trip when he was twelve years old…
The End
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